Corporate Video Feedback (East Norfolk)

1. Curriculum

Positive 
  • Videos of various subject well done
  • Informative
Negative
  • Audio possibly? Sounds weird

2. Extend

Positive
  • Jill's shot was nicely shot
  • Featuring a student
Negative 
  • Jill is looking at her notes and visible script
  • Jake's interview is too dark
  • Needs background music for interviews

3. T-Levels (Jamie's cut)

Positive 
  • Nice use of various shots
  • Graphics nice

Negative
  • Music too loud
  • Can barely hear the interviewees

4. Why choose EN?

Positive
  • Nice background music, matches well to video
  • Use of student
  • Shots are good
Negative
  • Simon audio quiet?

5. T-Levels (my cut)

Feedback (from clients and people within class)
  • Slower pans
  • Red outline could possibly be removed
  • Background noise for Simon
  • Audio
  • Background dim
  • Website link
  • T levels graphics could be added
  • Gittery shots
  • One sided audio (Matt)
  • Music turned down slightly

6. UEA

Positive
  • Shots of the hive are nice
  • Informative interviews
Negative
  • Background noise, audio too loud for the first interview
  • Richard framing too zoomed in
  • Blurry shot?
  • Dark for interviews

7. Support at EN

Positive
  • Informative
  • Interviews nicely shot, unique framing
Negative
  • Music too loud, fade needs to be longer at beginning
  • Possible cut away to shots of students?

8. Enhance

Positive 
  • For students by students nice touch
  • Various shots nicely framed
  • Music choice is nice
  • List of subject graphic was really nice
  • Short and informative
Negative
  • Simon's audio sounds odd?

Teacher Feedback (for my video)

  • Play about with the curves to make the colours pop a little more
  • In my audio, I just mention Business Services – as Matt doesn’t specify the other one (DDP&D), can you add that to mine? We need to list both
  • Is Matt slightly out of sync? He talks fast, so I’m not 100% sure
  • Gary’s audio and video needed OR we make this a digital T Level video only
  • Cut a few words from Simon at the end – start with “you’ve got to be really…”

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